Monday, September 16, 2013

blog response

i read Jacob’s vivid detail blog and thought it was amazing.  I love the way he used the vivid details.  I think I would be a much better writer if I could write like that.  He took an average moment of his week and turned 
it into a major event.  I felt like I was almost there.

It took me a few seconds to figure out what he was even talking about.  When I figured out he was talking about running on the Dupe Trail, I was amazed he could put that much detail into it. If any of you reading this have not read his post, I highly suggest you do.


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