A&P

I thought that the short story A&P was extremely confusing.  There were a lot of spelling errors that I noticed.  There were some silly mistakes like the writer forgot a space or a comma.  They made the story very confusing and hard to read.  There were some confusing irrelevant parts. 

                The story was interesting even with the errors.  The thoughts that were going through Sammy’s head were fun to read about.  It is an abnormal occurrence to have girls walk into a grocery store in their bathing suits.  I understand Lengal’s reaction but think he was kind of harsh.  It was funny to me that Sammy quit on the abstract thought that the girls would thank him and think would thing he was a hero.  If he wanted them to be thankful, he should have said something when lengal was yelling at them.

I have read 30 minutes in class, and have spent 1.5 hours annotating short stories I spent 1 hour of free reading