It has been far too long, since I last saw
The glow of your eyes and the color of your hair.
It has been far too long, since I last herd
The sound of your voice or the song on your lips.
I wish to see you just once again
You read this somewhere far away
I hope you miss, and do not forget
Me missing you from far away.
It has been far too long, since I last saw
The glow of your eyes and the color of your hair.
It has been far too long, since I last herd
The sound of your voice or the song on your lips.
If you don’t return
I can only hope
That our paths will meet
Once again, somewhere down the road
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enjambment
anaphora
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reading/ working times
30 minutes analyzing poetry Monday
10 minutes reading in class Thursday
120 minutes reading Split Monday
I really like this, Adam! I think every line ends where it should with a good use of enjambment and end stopped line, and the poem itself sounds really nice.
ReplyDeleteAdam, this is a beautiful poem! It tells a story and good wording throughout. I really like it a lot, great job.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is very deep and sounds very nice, good job.
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